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27th-Nov-2008 08:19 pm
Im twistin up the words into a lazy little ryhme
chokin on the herbs that took me half the day to find
Gettin drunk on you is one thing fillin up the time is fine
but when it comes down to it my minds still runnin lines
Im Gettin drunk on you
thoughts a little clouded
have a drink or two
to stop my head from poundin
feel a rush from you
eyes are closed, throat is burnin
gettin drunk on you

Tippin back my head and suckin down a shot or two
I am no longer sober but my minds still stuck on you
I can't control my laugher and its silly little highs
the lows will follow after when I repeat back all your lies
Im Gettin drunk on you
The thoughts will vanish
One shot or a few
can you taste the panic
Feel that rush anew
And I can't stand it
Gettin drunk on you

No wonder I can't handle this, my thoughts are runnin wild
it seems like you've been plannin this, your words felt kinda filed
did you write them in your memory, or etch them in your brain
cause the way they made me feel is makin me drink up all this pain
Im Gettin drunk on you
Maybe you knew
exactly what it would do
drinkin the damage
feel the tears break through
and my heart cant stand it
Gettin drunk on you
Comments 
9th-Jun-2009 10:24 am (UTC)
That was beautiful, very artistic flow and a wonderful beat to it... I could see someone sitting at a bar, reminising and hating how the good memories shifted to the overwhelming bad... beautiful <3
9th-Jun-2009 06:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you. Glad to hear you liked it. Its a favorite of mine. Much appreciated. <3 Luck. Love. Peace.
24th-Oct-2016 08:50 pm (UTC)

Very poignant and moving. I can almost hear Jeff Buckley singing this in a smoky bar

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